My First Paycheck

Apr 25, 2016 20:56
Today was a long-awaited payday for the first time in my life.

I checked my passbook balance at an ATM slowly and tentatively, and confirmed that the money was credited.

I was deeply moved.

Maybe I was smirking.

I'm not sure what I should use my.

First, I will give a dinner and a gift for my parent during next Golden Week holidays.

After that, I'd like to give a dinner for my mentor who taught me at a university.

Finally, I want to buy a new computer and an iPad for myself.

Hehehe.
初給料

今日は、待ちに待った初めてのお給料日です。

恐る恐るATMで通帳の残高を確認したら、無事振り込まれていました。

感動です。

顔がにやけます。

初給料で何をしようか迷います。

まず、ゴールデンウィークに、両親にご飯をごちそうして、贈り物をしようと思います。

それから、お世話になった指導教員の先生にもご飯をごちそうしたいです。

最後に、自分のために新しいパソコンとiPadが欲しいです。

へへへ。
No. 1　スイちゃん's correction
その感動、まだ覚えています！やったね。ところで、ここで「やったね」と言ってなんか変ですね（笑）
ご両親にご飯をごちそうするのがおすすめです。私は初めて給料をもらった後、おばあちゃんに履き心地の良い靴をプレゼントしました。おばあちゃんがとても嬉しそうに見えました。
Toru
スイちゃん、コメントありがとうございます :)
やりました（笑）

靴のプレゼント、いいですね～。
もうすぐ母の日、父の日なので、私も何かプレゼントを考えます。
No. 2　Kwang Ming (クアン　ミン）'s correction
  • Today was a long-awaited payday for the first time in my life.
  • Today, for the first time in my life, is my long-awaited payday.
    　More interesting and clearer.
  • I checked my passbook balance at an ATM slowly and tentatively, and confirmed that the money was credited.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I was deeply moved.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Maybe I was smirking.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I'm not sure what I should use my.
  • I'm not sure how I should spend it.
  • First, I will give a dinner and a gift for my parent during next Golden Week holidays.
  • To start it off, I will buy dinner and gifts for my parents during next Golden Week holidays.
    　If you only have a single parent, then you can change gifts and parents to singular.
  • After that, I'd like to give a dinner for my mentor who taught me at a university.
  • After that, I'd like to treat my mentor who taught me at the university.
    　treat = buy lunch or dinner but informal
  • Finally, I want to buy a new computer and an iPad for myself.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Hehehe.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Money makes the world go round huh? Especially our world. =) Congrats!
Toru
Thank you so much always for correcting my post!
> Money makes the world go round huh?
You bet! By the way, we call it "金は天下の回り物."
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